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Priya Hinduja's avatar

This is so creative! Absolutely loved it❤️❤️ It reminds me of Alfred Noyes poem The Elfin Artist that I loved as a kid which is also creative though on a different topic.

Tim Forsythe's avatar

Thank you. I’ll definitely go check it out.

Gary L Taylor's avatar

I really enjoyed this. Enchanting stuff. The flow and rhythm of it really suited what was being said.

B Philippe's avatar

This is incredibly enchanting, I love it. Whimsy at its finest!

Tim Forsythe's avatar

Thank you. It’s always nice to hear.

Nikki | Nocturnal Narrator's avatar

This reminded me so much of the stories my dad used to read me before bed. I could almost hear his voice in the cadence and tone. Such a beautiful poem. 🥲 I want more about the great and wonderful Princess Lydia!

Tim Forsythe's avatar

Nikki, that is so kind, thank you. Lydia will be happy to hear. She’s very proud of her poem and has read it to all her friends and teachers. I wrote another one of these for her younger sister, Valerie Rose, but haven’t posted it to Substack yet. An animated movie version of it is on my website if you’re interested and have 6 minutes to spare. It’s quite fun, it think you’ll enjoy it.

https://timforsythe.com/movie-the-faerie-queen?substack